MileyCross
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I got my first college paper back and my professor wrote "too close to sources" in the margins. I didn't copy anything word-for-word, but apparently I was still too dependent on how my sources said things.
I had a mini panic attack thinking I was going to get accused of plagiarism. My professor explained that "patchwriting" (changing a few words but keeping the same sentence structure) is still problematic.
After meeting with a writing tutor, here's what I learned about using sources without plagiarizing:
The "read and cover" method:
Read a section of the source, close it, then write what you remember in your own words. Then check if you accidentally copied phrases. This forces your brain to process the information first.
Ask yourself:
Before (too close): "Smith argues that social media has a detrimental impact on adolescent mental health due to increased social comparison and reduced face-to-face interaction."
After (my own words): According to Smith, scrolling through carefully curated posts makes teens compare themselves to unrealistic standards. At the same time, time online replaces real conversations that build social skills. Together, these factors hurt mental health.
My professor said my rewrite was much better. She could actually hear MY voice.
Anyone else struggle with this? How do you make sources sound like you?
I had a mini panic attack thinking I was going to get accused of plagiarism. My professor explained that "patchwriting" (changing a few words but keeping the same sentence structure) is still problematic.
After meeting with a writing tutor, here's what I learned about using sources without plagiarizing:
The "read and cover" method:
Read a section of the source, close it, then write what you remember in your own words. Then check if you accidentally copied phrases. This forces your brain to process the information first.
Ask yourself:
- What does this mean in simpler terms?
- Why does this matter for my argument?
- How does this connect to other sources?
- Do I agree or disagree with it?
- Quote when the exact words matter (someone's specific argument, a powerful statement, a definition)
- Paraphrase when you just need the idea (most of the time)
- Read the source and highlight key points
- Take notes in bullet points using my own words
- Write my paragraph without looking at the source
- Go back and add citations where needed
- Check if any phrases accidentally match the source
Before (too close): "Smith argues that social media has a detrimental impact on adolescent mental health due to increased social comparison and reduced face-to-face interaction."
After (my own words): According to Smith, scrolling through carefully curated posts makes teens compare themselves to unrealistic standards. At the same time, time online replaces real conversations that build social skills. Together, these factors hurt mental health.
My professor said my rewrite was much better. She could actually hear MY voice.
Anyone else struggle with this? How do you make sources sound like you?
I've definitely been guilty of just swapping synonyms and calling it a day. The "close the source" tip is simple but genius. Forces your brain to actually understand instead of just rearrange.
