Waylon
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I have to share this breakthrough because I literally went from crying over my keyboard to feeling like some kind of academic genius and the only thing that changed was understanding what a claim actually is. For my Gothic Literature class I had to write an analysis of Frankenstein and my first draft was just... summarizing the plot with some adjectives thrown in.
My thesis was "Frankenstein shows that playing God is dangerous" which my professor politely described as "a theme, not a claim, sweetie." Rude but fair I guess??
I went to the writing center because I was desperate and the tutor there finally broke it down in a way my brain could process. She said a claim is basically an argument that needs proving and it usually has two parts: the observation and the significance.
Like you're not just saying something exists you're saying something MEANS something. So for Frankenstein I changed it to "Shelley uses the Creature's physical monstrosity as a metaphor for societal rejection, ultimately arguing that isolation creates villainy rather than revealing it" and suddenly my whole paper had DIRECTION.
It's like before I was just wandering around in the dark bumping into furniture and after I understood claims I turned on the lights and could actually see where I was going. Every paragraph became easier because I just asked myself "does this support my claim?" and if it didn't I cut it. No more rambling!! No more filler!! Just straight up evidence for my argument.
The craziest part is now I see claims EVERYWHERE. In news articles, in podcasts, even in my friends' Instagram captions when they're trying to make a point. It's like learning a new word and suddenly hearing it everywhere.
If you're struggling with papers please please please start with understanding your claim before you write anything else. It's literally the difference between building a house with a blueprint and just throwing bricks at the ground and hoping a wall appears
My thesis was "Frankenstein shows that playing God is dangerous" which my professor politely described as "a theme, not a claim, sweetie." Rude but fair I guess??
I went to the writing center because I was desperate and the tutor there finally broke it down in a way my brain could process. She said a claim is basically an argument that needs proving and it usually has two parts: the observation and the significance.
Like you're not just saying something exists you're saying something MEANS something. So for Frankenstein I changed it to "Shelley uses the Creature's physical monstrosity as a metaphor for societal rejection, ultimately arguing that isolation creates villainy rather than revealing it" and suddenly my whole paper had DIRECTION.
It's like before I was just wandering around in the dark bumping into furniture and after I understood claims I turned on the lights and could actually see where I was going. Every paragraph became easier because I just asked myself "does this support my claim?" and if it didn't I cut it. No more rambling!! No more filler!! Just straight up evidence for my argument.
The craziest part is now I see claims EVERYWHERE. In news articles, in podcasts, even in my friends' Instagram captions when they're trying to make a point. It's like learning a new word and suddenly hearing it everywhere.
If you're struggling with papers please please please start with understanding your claim before you write anything else. It's literally the difference between building a house with a blueprint and just throwing bricks at the ground and hoping a wall appears
I got that feedback on a paper about Beloved and had no idea what it meant at the time. Now I get it. Themes are what the book is about. Claims are what YOU are arguing about what the book is about. Your Frankenstein example is perfect—you moved from "this exists" to "this means something." That's the whole game.