DafnaSheber
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Applying to grad school for architecture. My portfolio is strong. My designs are conceptual but grounded. I can spend 12 hours in the studio working on a model and feel energized. Give me a roll of trace paper and some markers, and I'm happy. 
But this personal statement is going to be the death of me.
Every draft I write sounds like I'm apologizing for not being an English major. "While I may not have a way with words, my visual language speaks volumes." That's so cringey, right? I hate it. It sounds like I'm making excuses before anyone even reads it.
The prompt asks why I want to study architecture and what influences my work. But how do I explain a visual influence with words? I'm obsessed with the way light hits raw concrete. I'm fascinated by the tension between solid and void. These are feelings, not arguments. How do I put that on paper without sounding like a pretentious Instagram caption?
My friend who's applying for creative writing keeps telling me to "paint a picture with words." That's literally your job, not mine! My job is to paint pictures with actual lines and materials.
I also don't know how much to talk about specific projects. Do I describe my designs in detail? That feels redundant since they'll see the portfolio anyway. Do I talk about concepts instead? That feels too vague.
Has anyone here applied to a visual arts grad program and actually written a personal statement they were proud of? How did you bridge the gap between what you make and what you write? I need help from fellow visual thinkers!
But this personal statement is going to be the death of me.
Every draft I write sounds like I'm apologizing for not being an English major. "While I may not have a way with words, my visual language speaks volumes." That's so cringey, right? I hate it. It sounds like I'm making excuses before anyone even reads it.
The prompt asks why I want to study architecture and what influences my work. But how do I explain a visual influence with words? I'm obsessed with the way light hits raw concrete. I'm fascinated by the tension between solid and void. These are feelings, not arguments. How do I put that on paper without sounding like a pretentious Instagram caption?
My friend who's applying for creative writing keeps telling me to "paint a picture with words." That's literally your job, not mine! My job is to paint pictures with actual lines and materials.
I also don't know how much to talk about specific projects. Do I describe my designs in detail? That feels redundant since they'll see the portfolio anyway. Do I talk about concepts instead? That feels too vague.
Has anyone here applied to a visual arts grad program and actually written a personal statement they were proud of? How did you bridge the gap between what you make and what you write? I need help from fellow visual thinkers!
